Week 10 Story: The Marching Worm
There once was a little boy and girl who were curious about
everything. They wanted to know why the sky was blue and the grass was green.
One day, they looked up at the great mountain that they lived below and had to
know how it got there. They ran to the tribe’s storyteller and begged him to
tell them how the mountain came to be. The storyteller happened to be free for
a little bit so he sat down beside them and began the story about another
little boy and girl that lived in there tribe long ago.
The little boy and girl lived in the valley between hills
but there were no mountains around. There was a watering hole by their village
and there was a perfect sized pool they loved to lounge in. In this valley all
animals came together to drink and socialize. This was before animals had
become enemies and so everyone was peaceful.
On an especially hot day, the little boy and girl went to
their pool of water and swam and played. They stayed in much longer than usual
because they knew when they got out, the hot sun would make them sweat. When
they finally retreated from the water, they were quite chilly. They had the
idea to run up the closest hill to their village and take a nap in the
afternoon sun. They soon fell asleep on top of the hill. As they slept, the hill
quietly shot up into a mountain.
Down below, the little boy and girl’s parents realized they
were gone. They started to look all over for them, asking the animals to help.
Finally, after every nook and cranny had been searched, they realized the children
must be on top of the mountain. Distraught, the parents asked for the animals’
help to get the children down. The jack rabbit, mouse, antelope, and mountain
lion all attempted to make their way to the top of the mountain but eventually
they all failed. Finally, a tiny voice was heard. It was a measuring worm that
said he wanted to try. Everyone laughed at the thought, but the measuring worm
began his journey.
It took him many days to read the top but he never stopped
trying and slowly he inched his way all the way to the top of the mountain.
There he found the children safely waiting. During his journey, the measuring worm had
found an unknown path and he led the children safely down the mountain. When
they all returned, the people were so grateful for what he did; they named the
mountain after him. No other animal had the perseverance or bravery to do what
he had down and save the children.
Author’s note: This is based on a Native American story
about children who fall asleep and end up among the clouds. I decided to do a
straight retelling of the story to keep it’s sweet message, but put it in my
own words.
Bibliography: American Indian Fairy Tales by W.T. Larned, with illustrations by John Rae (1921).
Image Information: Flickr, Measuring Worm
Hi Kennedie! I just read your introduction post, and I saw how you want to help people so I can see the parallels between your interests and this story. The brave measuring worm helped save the children and had to go a great distance to do so, but it was worth it in the end. Great job with the retelling of the original story and I look forward to reading more from you!
ReplyDeleteHey Kennedie, this is a great message and I can see why you wanted to keep it in your retelling of the story. I also really like how concise your story is. Without dialogue, the story seems succinct and complete without being very expansive. I wonder if this could be turned into some kind of origin story explaining a characteristic of the inch worm. Overall, great story!
ReplyDeleteHello Kennedie,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story! It was very encouraging. I felt like this story had a moral to it. They could not find them so they guessed that they had to be at the top of the mountain. The moral is sometimes you have to inch yourself yourself to the top to get where you want to be. I think you did a great job telling the story in your own words.